So I’ve been working on this damned book for a while. And while I had the basics of a good story, there were issues. Even before I went to Viable Paradise, I knew the story had a glaring plot hole. I kept working, on the theory that I’d be able to plug the hole eventually, but even when I got back from VP, no solution had presented itself.
Back when I was at VP, a comment from Elizabeth Bear about my manuscript prompted a mindstorm of thought that eventually lead to a total revamp of the communications technology of my protagonist and his society.
A couple of days ago, ruminating on that particular rabbit hole experience opened up a new story element I think will improve the story. But I still couldn’t figure out my plot hole, which was big, as it spoke to the motivation behind the entire story. In essence, and I’m being cagey because I don’t want to give stuff away here, the main antagonist’s actions didn’t make sense. Why do what they did to humanity when it would be far simpler to just destroy the planet from orbit and move on?
Anyway, I was noodling through the plot points as they will be rewritten. And I ran into the plot hole again. And there was great gnashing of teeth in the land.
And then LO! The voice of Steve “With a Hat” Brust–or, if you prefer, Steven frelling Brust–came to me, a remembered line from VP: “If you’re stuck on where the story goes next, get on at Need and go all the way to Can’t.” I might not have that right; but the gist is correct.
And goddamn if that didn’t do the trick. I know why they did it. I know what that means for the characters. I know what it means for the human race. And I know what it means for the second book, if such a thing ever comes to pass. And the third, for that matter.
And I cannot wait to get writing on that thing. But first: my Thursday story needs to be revised. See ya!