So, while I wait for the edits on The Widening Gyre, I’m busy working on book 2, The Blood-Dimmed Tide. As you can imagine from the title, book 2 is a much messier book.
Unfortunately, that messiness was in the plot, too. Some of it I already saw, and some was pointed out to me by a friend who took a look at it. So today, I spent several hours working on it.
I basically ripped the plotline apart and looked at the constituent parts. Once I had a grasp of all the parts of the plot I needed and/or wanted in the book, I put it back together. While doing that, I realized a few new scenes I needed, and slotted those in, and I also figured out that with the new shape of the story, I don’t really need a secondary POV anymore. I like the character, though, so I’ve kept her as a character, but she won’t be narrating.
Now I’m writing up a synopsis, just so I know the story holds together, and then I’ll get started on the actual composition of the chapters. Once I get a couple of those down, I’ll send what I have to my editor, and find out if I’m on the right track enough for him to sign it, or if I need to go back to the drawing board. I’m also taking some notes for Book 3, The Ceremony of Innocence, but I’m leaving off major plotting on that until after Book 2 is done.